導(dǎo)語：奧數(shù)網(wǎng)給同學(xué)們匯總了小學(xué)五年級(jí)英語作文范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)，希望同學(xué)們的英語學(xué)習(xí)有所幫助。以下為五年級(jí)英語作文范文：

　　A Field Trip

　　It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited. Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip.

　　【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　寫法：這篇習(xí)作是按照郊游時(shí)的畫面來描述的，記敘了同學(xué)們分別在郊游中做了哪些活動(dòng)及郊游的感受。

　　時(shí)態(tài)：這篇文章可以用一般過去時(shí)和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)來寫。由于本單元主要講的是現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，所以，這里我們采用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)比較合適。

　　句型： ××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re doing sth.

　　注意：活動(dòng)的相關(guān)表述法采用新舊知識(shí)相結(jié)合去寫。注意時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換、描寫感受時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。